Choose one specific idea and make a CLAIM that this idea helped you become a stronger writer.
Use SUPPORT to explain HOW this idea helped you become a stronger writer.
What QUESTION do you still wonder about our writing so far?
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Choose one specific idea and make a CLAIM that this idea helped you become a stronger writer. Use SUPPORT to explain HOW this idea helped you become a stronger writer. What QUESTION do you still wonder about our writing so far?
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Abraham
10/29/2015 02:58:47 pm
CLAIM:all of the strategies can help us to publishing SUPPORT because if I didn't have the strategies we would have to redo our story.
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Abraham
10/29/2015 03:02:40 pm
QUESTION can we have the other strategies to make writing strong off all?
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Manav
10/30/2015 10:35:22 am
Yes you could be right when you said that if you did not have a strategie we had to redo are story because If you right a story it will be harder to write a story !
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Sean
10/29/2015 03:03:27 pm
C:Endings helped me.
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Vignesh
10/30/2015 10:35:59 am
Your endings can be more stronger because using strong endings will help you be a good writer then your endings when you become an athor you might need to have a strong ending if you want to be a better writer if you have a not good ending that means your not ready to be a writer.
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V̤̈ä̤n̤̈s̤̈ḧ̤ï̤k̤̈ä̤
10/29/2015 03:04:28 pm
The idea I choose was the pallet
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John
10/30/2015 10:29:59 am
I agree that you could find strong words
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Siri
10/30/2015 10:31:05 am
I agree because I also had a bunch of non-interesting action words in my writing and because of the chart my writing became much more stronger and intresting
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Katharina
10/30/2015 10:35:05 am
I agree because I also thought the Padlet for strong action verbs helped me to use stronger verbs like dashed, or I sprinted .
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Brenda Mao #19
10/29/2015 03:06:29 pm
ᑕᒪᗩIᗰ: My claim is that making the Padlet for stronger verbs.
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Akshara
10/30/2015 10:32:03 am
I agree to l think that l should go deeper in the story and think about if I was reading this writing would l like this.
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Melodie
10/29/2015 03:06:35 pm
This trick recording trick helped us be a better writer because it helped us use strong verbs. Another trick that helped us is when we practiced strong leads so the beginning won't be boring. Editing also helps us so we can make or story more fascinating so when we write on our publishing paper so we don't make the same mistake.
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Melodie
10/29/2015 10:03:18 pm
SUPPORT: my support is that it helps us develop better words for our story but it still means the same way how it happened or how we felt.
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Brenda Mao#19
10/30/2015 10:35:28 am
I wonder that too. Is there another trick similar to that? It makes writing stronger using different tricks, which all of them make different parts of your writing stronger.
Ābrähãm
10/30/2015 10:33:29 am
I don't know what recording trick is. Can you explain more?
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Ḁͦm̥ͦe̥ͦy̥ͦḁͦ
10/29/2015 03:07:45 pm
S̥ͦt̥ͦr̥ͦo̥ͦn̥ͦg̥ͦ ḁͦc̥ͦt̥ͦi̥ͦo̥ͦn̥ͦ v̥ͦe̥ͦr̥ͦb̥ͦs̥ͦ h̥ͦe̥ͦl̥ͦp̥ͦe̥ͦd̥ͦ m̥ͦe̥ͦ b̥ͦe̥ͦc̥ͦo̥ͦm̥ͦe̥ͦ ḁͦ b̥ͦe̥ͦt̥ͦt̥ͦe̥ͦr̥ͦ w̥ͦr̥ͦi̥ͦt̥ͦe̥ͦr̥ͦ.
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Katharina
10/29/2015 03:08:36 pm
MY CLAIM IS: doing the Padlet for strong action verbs help me.
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Linsey
10/30/2015 10:35:53 am
I agree Katharina!I agree because I didn't have strong action words either and doing the pallet helped me make a lot of changes.
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Vignesh
10/29/2015 03:08:48 pm
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Akshara
10/29/2015 03:09:03 pm
Strong leads helped me because strong leads woke me up and strong leads helped me go deep in the book and Ithoughtlike a reader would l like this or not.
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Melodie
10/30/2015 10:30:41 am
I agree because it makes your reader wake up too, and it also makes us wake up too.
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Vanshika
10/30/2015 10:33:24 am
Yeah I do think it makes your reader wake up to.
Manav
10/29/2015 03:09:11 pm
The zoomed in routine helped me because . It made me have a better ending and it made my writing better . And when I looked in a mentor text It made me a better ending and made me help others have a great and better ending!
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Alex
10/30/2015 10:31:56 am
Why?
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ᗩᐯEE #17
10/29/2015 03:11:02 pm
I think that chain link stories where helpful for me.
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Prabhath
10/29/2015 03:12:14 pm
Claim: The cups paper helped most because......
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Prabhath
10/29/2015 03:22:44 pm
It also helped me because for usage sometimes when I write something sometimes it does not make sense.So that was helpful to.Capitization helped me because sometimes I do not capitalize a word near a period.And when I read back I notice that.S for spelling helped me because as I said somtimes I do not capitilze a proper noun.So that's why that helped me.
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John
10/30/2015 10:32:34 am
I agree because it was helpful to find mistakes in our writing
Miss.Avanti
10/29/2015 03:13:44 pm
This unit helped me do revisions and editing.
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Abby
10/29/2015 03:16:19 pm
MY CIAM is to making shre thane is good to add more astene words
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B̤̮r̤̮e̤̮n̤̮d̤̮a̤̮ M̤̮a̤̮o̤̮ #19
10/29/2015 03:17:14 pm
CྉLྉAྉIྉMྉ: My claim is that making a genre presentation helped me become a stronger and better reader.
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Melodie
10/30/2015 10:35:47 am
I agree because it helped us think more about the books and know more about what we're reading so it also makes it eager to explain so more people can get the idea of what the book is about.
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SRAVYA
10/29/2015 03:17:30 pm
Claim:Adding internal thoughts helped me be a better writer.
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Linsey #4
10/29/2015 03:17:31 pm
Revising helped me in my writing.
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Caden #10
10/29/2015 03:19:41 pm
CLAIM
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Eddie
10/30/2015 10:34:04 am
I agree because capital letters at the beginning of a sentence or a proper noun is extremely important and that is a requirement.
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John
10/29/2015 03:20:08 pm
Revising and editing
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Rishi
10/29/2015 03:20:27 pm
Claim:Verbs help me in my writing. Support:Verbs make my writing more interesting.
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Thanvi
10/29/2015 03:20:33 pm
Claim it helped me when we t talked about were we live
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Miss Vanshika
10/30/2015 10:30:53 am
Where is your question?
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Melodie
10/29/2015 03:20:52 pm
I think check for understanding helps us because it helps us use the strategies what we could use when we get stuck on a word and get to know more strategies. Another one that helps us be a better reader is learning about genres so if we want to write or own book, you have to know what kind of genre we want it to be.
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Eddie
10/29/2015 03:21:09 pm
I think learning about strong endings helped me the most because they made my writing stronger by developing more interesting things in my writing so everyone wants more making me a better writer so it helps me make better stories. I wonder why stronger endings and leads and words makes me a better writer?
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Dhruv
10/29/2015 03:22:09 pm
CLAIM:How do I hook my reader is going to help me in writing in the future.
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Jessica
10/29/2015 03:22:16 pm
CLAM: Adding thought feelings and response can make are story better and adding other stuff can make it better too.
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Sཽhཽrཽuཽtཽhཽiཽkཽaཽ
10/29/2015 09:25:00 pm
Transition words helped me because in stead of putting I did this using transition words make it better.Ading to my story helped me because I got more interesting words.
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Sashi
10/30/2015 10:36:06 am
Transition words because it helps me understand when and where happened in the story
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Vanshika
10/30/2015 10:36:18 am
I agree transition words helped me to.
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