What characters would be a part of this chapter?
Remember as you write your chapter, the story was written in THIRD PERSON (There was a narrator).
If there was another chapter in the book, what would it be about?
What characters would be a part of this chapter? Remember as you write your chapter, the story was written in THIRD PERSON (There was a narrator).
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Akshara
10/23/2015 03:25:17 pm
If there was another chapter in this book Maggie and Abilien and Edward will move and years will pass and Maggie will give Edward to her grandchild and the grandchild will give Edward to her child.
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Dhruv
10/24/2015 08:48:40 pm
I really liked that you kind of made the story happen all over again and I really would love the story to happen again like one-thousand times.
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Avee
2/21/2016 12:49:56 pm
I think that will be a cool thing to happen because I loved the book
Sashi
10/23/2015 03:25:38 pm
I think it would be all of them characters have kids.
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Caden Harding #10
10/23/2015 03:25:53 pm
It would be about Ablen and Edward and
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Sashi
10/23/2015 03:33:46 pm
I think that too because since Edward changed into caring about people and now he should be bragging about love because he went through all that and found love again
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Prabhath
10/23/2015 03:26:00 pm
Chapter 28
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Dhruv
10/24/2015 07:26:57 am
I really liked when you wrote jumping in joyful clouds and I included that in my Edward Tulane to be continued and what else I liked about that is because you didn't just say happy instead you dug deep and said jumping in joyful!
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Prabhath
10/24/2015 10:00:27 am
Chapter 29
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Thanvi Cattamanchi
10/23/2015 03:26:00 pm
1.It would be about Edward with Maggie playing together until she will grow to be a big kid.2. The characters in this story are Maggie,Avilin,her dad if Avilin is married and some other characters...
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Melodie
10/23/2015 03:26:08 pm
If there is a chapter 28 I would like the chapter Oh No Dream! The chapter would be about Edward have a thinking or a dream about Sarah Ruth coming back alive and finding Edward. And when she does, Sarah Ruth and Maggie (Ablines daughter) will get in a fight of getting Edward. Then Edward would have to start over his journey. But this time he traveled until another country. Then he gets lost again. After he gets lost again some mean people come in his way and he has to find a way to get himself out of the trouble.
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Brenda Mao #19
10/23/2015 03:26:18 pm
Chapter 28:
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Dhruv
10/24/2015 07:50:10 am
I liked that you in your chapter Mr.Clark said something but Abiline ignored and I think she ignored Mr.Clark because of how special Edward is and I really liked that!
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Sravya
10/23/2015 03:26:24 pm
"Yes!" Thought Edward, he arrived at Abbeline's house. He felt a big smile on his face. Edward was with finally with Abbeline again. She looked so different of course because she was grown up.
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Sravya
10/23/2015 07:15:32 pm
"Here is the money." Abbeline said to lushyas Clark Edward was dreaming.Maggie hugged Edward so tight but Edward did not care. They all 3 went home at home was Maggie's dad "What you got there?" Asked her dad "Meet my old best friend Edward" Abbeline said. "I found him in the toy store" Maggie said in a cute voice. The old doll was right someone did come for Edward.
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Katharina
10/23/2015 03:26:30 pm
If there was another chapter in the body k it would be about , Abiline would buy Edward and take him home and they said they will not buy anything and if Abiline has a husband they might get into a fight and not understand each other again .
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Shruthika Hemalatha
10/23/2015 03:26:31 pm
If there was another chapter it would be about Maggie and Edvard together because in the preveas chapter Maggie asked her mother that was Abilene to buy Edvard.
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Melodie
10/23/2015 05:20:59 pm
I like your answer because you reflected back in the story. Another reason I liked it because I used the same story. Really smart.
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Vignesh
10/23/2015 03:26:36 pm
If there were a new chapter it would be about Edward and Maggie having adwensers together sleeping and the same thing that happened to abalene like losing people he loves and getting owned by a kid of Maggie's and there would be lots of crarecters in this chapter like Edward and other people that would own him.
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Ameya
10/23/2015 03:26:37 pm
"Mommy,can we buy him?" Maggie pleaded and pleaded. Her mother was speechless. Maggie put on her puppy dog eyes. "Can we?"Maggie asked again. "I'm so glad you asked that!" Abilene cried. She grabbed Edward right from Maggie's hands and grabbed the gold pocket watch from her neck. She elegantly put the gold pocket watch on Edward's hand. "Perfect," she whispered.
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Vanshika
10/23/2015 03:58:59 pm
Ameya I love how you typed some good words like pleaded and speechless I you have a very good chapter maybe you should do a Edward Tulane that will tell the other chapters
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Rishi
10/23/2015 03:26:44 pm
When Maggie and Abilene took Edward
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Vic # 15
10/23/2015 03:26:55 pm
If Thaer wore more chapters my will go like this? Wen Edwerd fond abolen
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Manav
10/23/2015 03:27:03 pm
My chapter would talk about Maggie Playing with Edward in her hands just like how Sarah Ruth was playing with Eward and then Abilene comes and says come on Maggie it is time to eat.
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Prabhath
10/23/2015 05:06:08 pm
Nice thinking Dhruv I think your chapter is awesome because I liked when you said that the owner called the police and Abilene said that she's not going to pay for this one and ran of.
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Dhruv
10/24/2015 08:55:41 pm
I really thought yours was AWSOME and maybe next time I might add some of your ideas to my writing and that is a very awsome comment you did and I really liked it and it made me feel very inspired to write more story's when I get older or maybe even when I'm still a kid!
Dhruv
10/23/2015 03:27:17 pm
CHAPTER 1:
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Abraham
10/23/2015 05:09:36 pm
OMG! Abilene didn't pay? That what really made your story awesome!! I am not kidding!
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John
10/23/2015 03:27:22 pm
Edward lay on the bed surround him with positive thoughts he was he was interrupted by Abilne she held him and remembered how much fun they had Edward was hot from the hot day the sun was gaining from the outside ,Edward was brought to a high chair just like he was at Nelly and Lawrance but he only saw Abilne eyes and he rembered seeing Pelligrina looking in his eye saying "you disappoint me ".As they ate Edward looked at the foggy night and was token to Abilne room and she slept with him.
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Jessica
10/23/2015 10:31:31 pm
I like all of your details. I like how you said as they ate Edward looked at the foggy night and was taken to Abilne room and she slept with him. That showed that Edward was loved.
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Linsey
10/23/2015 03:27:39 pm
Chapter 28
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Vanshika
10/23/2015 03:27:47 pm
Maggie bought edward and just when they got to there home Edward got STOLEN and Bruce is the one who stole it because if he froze Edward Bruce's sister will be back ALIVE Bruce did not want to do this but he had to just when that was happening Maggie found out what he was doing exactly before he froze Edward Maggie said out loud EDWARD I WANT YOU BACK she was crying.
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Jessica
10/23/2015 03:28:25 pm
The little gril loved Edward like Ablen loved him and the little girl loved him and Edward listen and loved her to. Edward remember the time that he got thrown of the boat and got told a story about love and fisher men found him and somwon threw him in the grabge and he was in the dum into I dog found him and gave him to his house owner that was a howbo and many more things
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Eddie
10/23/2015 03:29:01 pm
Chapter 28 (bonus):Edward and Maggie were playing together extremely happy till,Maggie spun Edward to much and to hard that he flew out off her hands and he flew overhead and landed far away in some soft dirt. The dirt broke Edward's fall and he survived the impact and Edward thought " Thank goodness I'm alive but, what about Maggie?" Edward wondered while his head was halfway in the dirt and his rabbit fur ears covered in dirt. A hour later Edward heard footsteps and he heard a little girl say "there it is!" it was Maggie! Not to long later Edward was back home and sleeping with Maggie and he stared at the stars and remembered his journey. THE END
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Sravya
10/23/2015 07:29:23 pm
I liked the part that Edward was in the dirt and that you explained the way he was in the dirt & the parts of his china body that were in the dirt and remembering his journey that happened before Abbeline and Maggie found him.
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Avee #17
10/23/2015 03:29:23 pm
Edward again had a million fancy suits.Maggie dressed him and every night would tuck Edward into his bed.Abillene soon announced they were moving into a mansion every room decorated with walls embroidered with gold,soon they had moved.It was late in July it was one ordinary evening when there was a voice from outside that said that said "This is the rabbits home."in came Bull,Rosie,Lawrence and Nellie also Brice.Edwards heart was filled with lots of love again for all of them
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Abe
10/23/2015 05:04:15 pm
Narrator Abraham. The doll was right. Someone had came for Edward. Maggie hopped happily home and put Edward wildly. In this case Edward could shattered but Edward got hold from a table. Maggie asked Abilene if she could go outside. Abilene said yes. Then Maggie took Edward outside and called her pal C.J. Maggie showed Edward so hard that he s h a t t e r e d. OH NO! HOW IS THE REST GOING TO GO!?
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Dhruv
10/24/2015 07:42:44 am
I really liked that you created a new character that is C.J.What else I liked was when you saidTO BE CONTINUED!
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