joshua
11/18/2014 06:56:35 am
I see that frogy is forgeting so much stuff
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joshua
11/18/2014 06:58:51 am
I think his writing funny
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Dhruv
11/18/2014 07:00:32 am
I see that he used allot dialog.It makes me think he likes talking in his story.I wonder,what does he use allot in the book froggy gets dressed.
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sean
11/18/2014 07:00:56 am
I see that he used sound words. It makes me think why is he using sound words at the end of the like ( he put on his hat - zit! )It MAKES ME WONDER IS THE SOUND WORDS HELPING THE WORD.
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arjun
11/18/2014 07:01:05 am
I see he had on that makes me think he used repatioin and it makes me wonder will he use it agin.
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katharina 25
11/18/2014 07:01:15 am
I SEE: he used sound effect''zut''
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joshua
11/18/2014 07:01:51 am
I wonder what his other writing is about
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shreyas
11/18/2014 07:02:26 am
he used sounds like frogy and used it all over agin
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john
11/18/2014 07:03:16 am
I see he used storytellers voice by saying frrrooggyy! I think why does he use it.I wonder will he use that more in his stories.
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rishi
11/18/2014 07:04:25 am
I see FRRROOGGYY! that makes me think the author wants us to say it loud and that makes me wonder why does the author use sound effects?
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Prabhath
11/18/2014 07:10:44 am
I think that Froggy is missing some stuff to Praharshita.
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praharshita
11/18/2014 07:05:03 am
I like how he has FROGGY! a lot of times.
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Prabhath
11/18/2014 07:07:27 am
I see:I see that Johnathan used onomatopoeia sound effects and lots more other stuff.
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Abraham
11/18/2014 07:07:53 am
SEE:Action words like zup and zwit . THINK:It's used to make his story intresting.WONDER:Will he use other tools
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Linsey
11/18/2014 07:10:35 am
I see that when frogys mom yells frrrooggyy on the bottom right corner. That makes me think Johnathan London wonted the readers to look at that. I wonder why did he used F R R O O G G Y Y!?
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caden
11/18/2014 07:11:24 am
i see that he yooz a lot of iscpereshin i see it in the test .i wonder if frogy is very sad in an ether book.i think it is baste on his childminder.
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sravya
11/18/2014 07:11:39 am
I see that Jonothen London used ontomontopia and storytellers voice
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Jessica Haerens
11/18/2014 07:13:58 am
I see FRRROOGGYY . I think that Frogys mom is saying it super lowed because it looks like this FRRROOGGYY and it has a !. I wonder why frogy was forgetting so much stuff.
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Saatvik
11/18/2014 07:14:09 am
I see Jonathan London used lots of sound effects like "zap." I think he used sound effects to make his writing more interesting. I wonder if I should add that in my writing.
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joshua
11/18/2014 07:15:10 am
I see he used sound effects.I think his writing is great.I wonder in his other books did he use sound effects.
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siri
11/18/2014 07:15:46 am
I see that Jhonothen London used lots of sound effect like flop-flop-flop,zum,zap and zwit.I think J.L. likes to interest readers by sound
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Avee
11/18/2014 07:16:08 am
I see...
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abby
11/18/2014 07:17:41 am
i see that frogy is having so much fuun i thik he si going to frget to put eneth else on i wondr wele he get inthrobl
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Avanti
11/18/2014 07:18:50 am
I see that he used reapting words in his story because his mom capt on saying FRROOGGYY!.I am thinking why is he using reaping words in his story.I am wondering if i can use reapting words in my story.
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nicole kristina torkos 24 7 sistr 9
11/18/2014 07:24:57 am
i see that he was drasing up and he was allwaste mising somting and than he sad i am to tirde and than he went to slep and he was snoring.i wunder wiy is he olwast frgeting somting.i think because he is wonting to go uot sedi so much the other is tring to do his best as she can and i think he did god i like his wrke very very god i like him.
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thanvi
11/18/2014 07:28:04 am
i see that the author is using story tellers voice. and it is interesting.i think he wants the readers to think he is good. I wonder why does the author uses his sons to write books.
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